Arthur Machen, "The Great God Pan". Arthur Machen, The Great God Pan, Creation Books, London, 1993. ISBN 1-871592-11-9. The horizontal rules at the top and bottom of the novel's pages could be eliminated advantageously. The paragraph indentation is too deep. - p. 11: H. P. Lovecraft [Should be: H.P. Lovecraft, according to the initials layout used for other names.]
- p. 11: Order Of The Golden Dawn [Should be: Order of the Golden Dawn.]
- p. 14: Betjemin... Jerome K Jerome... Jorges Luis Borges [For: Betjeman... Jerome K. Jerome... Jorge Luis Borges.]
- p. 15: Argentum Astram [Should be: Argenteum Astrum.]
- p. 18: prison- walls [For: prison-walls.]
- p. 21: For me; these thoughts... [Should be: For me, these thoughts...]
- p. 23: I was happy for a whole evening; while I thought of the curious and beautiful thing I was to invent. [Should be: evening, while.]
- p. 24: Mr, Machen [For: Mr. Machen.]
- p. 25: His bogles don't scare [Probably: bogies.]
- p. 29: [The word PAN in the title is inadequately typeset in poor man's bold, i.e. the superposition of slightly shifted letters, which visibly double the A and actually split the right vertical stroke of the N.]
- p. 50: Mr.R., [For: Mr. R.,]
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